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INTRODUCTION
For any film project that goes into production, the major element that
is critical to its completion is the film's screenplay. The screenplay
serves as a blueprint to what the final product will become, and during
filming the screenwriter, director, or even the actors can suggest creative
enhancements to improve the flow of the story, from minor changes such
as line removals or reversals, to major overhauls in key sequences due
to excessive budget costs or business decisions from studio heads attempting
to determine what the audience wants to see on screen. In many cases story
meetings are necessary to improve or revise the story to strengthen character
motivation to a natural flow. The relationship between screenwriter and
director must be symbiotic, in order for the integrity of the material
to be maintained throughout filming, post-production, and editing. With
many writer-directors such as George Lucas, James Cameron, Woody Allen,
Leonard Nimoy, Robert Townsend, Nicholas Meyer, and Spike Lee assuming
both responsibilities, the creative decisions in writing fall solely on
their shoulders.
When Alexander and Ilya Salkind bought the film rights to "Superman"
in 1973-74, their concern was to produce a feature film whose story honored
its comic-book origins yet brought then-contemporary audiences a new spin
on a classic legend. This led to many meetings with DC Comics and their
parent owner Warner Communications, who had creative control over the
Superman property. Stated Ilya Salkind, "...we telephoned our initial
overtures from Paris, and, not surprisingly, they didn't take us very
seriously. But Alex isn't discouraged easily, and we made a few more phone
calls and soon they started listening. Obviously the impact of ("The
Three Musketeers" and its ready-made sequel "The Four Musketeers")
was working in our favor." Added Pierre Spengler, line producer
of the first three films in the series, "It was the mechanics of
preserving the 'Superman' character that made it all so intricate, because
neither side wanted to give up too much control. Having veto power over
selection of the screenwriter... lists of names were submitted."
But the elder Salkind held his position with Warner Bros., and the success
of the "Musketeers" movies gave him that bargaining power with
Warner Bros. "When Ilya mentioned it, I started reading all the stuff
about it, and I believed it could be very good as a major film,"
stated Salkind, "if it would be done right."
Initially Ilya Salkind approached William Goldman, one of the most successful
screenwriters of the 1970's, to write a first-draft screenplay. Despite
his interest in the project, he was unclear as to what treatment the Salkinds
wanted, so he politely declined. They turned their attention to Mario
Puzo. The acclaimed writer of "The Godfather" had just scored
a dual success with his magnum opus being adapted by Francis Ford Coppola
into two highly successful Academy Award-winning films in 1972 and 1974,
when he desired to pursue a new story of a different magnitude. The timing
couldn't have been better. It seemed like the perfect combination: the
mythic nature of the Man of Steel and Puzo's commitment to strong storytelling,
plot, and character development. And with Puzo's name recognition in Hollywood,
thanks to the success of the "Godfather" films, his vision of
Superman would be equally epic in nature.
Through three separate film treatments the story of both "Superman"
and "Superman II" presented a challenge not only to Puzo but
also to his successors who would mold and re-mold his story into the final
product we all know and love. This series of articles will chronicle the
evolution of the "Superman" films from the screenplay's point
of view, from initial concept to rewrite, to shooting script, to final
product.
But along the way something from the treatments got excised. What survived
into the final film and what didn't? How do the scripts compare and contrast
to the final product? And why were such revisions in the script necessary?
To look at such changes and revisions and excisions, one need only look
at where it all began, the story of "Superman"...
Come with me now, my readers, as we break through the bonds of our written
confinement, traveling through time and space, to the beginning of the
story of "Superman"...
PART
2 - The PUZO Treatment
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